Introduction
My introduction isn´t finished it is only the beginning….hopefully
Introduction
In common communities or city´s today everybody is acquainted to fences around his or her house or ground. A fence is a symbol for safety and protection or suggests the message to be left out. Actually fences are build with the wish to keep somebody out. Currently a wall, an oversized fence, saves the border from the USA to Mexico. An incredible amount of policemen and members of the Immigration and naturalization Service (INS) support. Creating a huge gated community. When T. Coraghessan Boyle wrote his novel “The Tortilla Curtain” he thought about this situation and reduced it onto a suburb of Los Angeles. In the following I am going to discuss certain questions which came to my mind regarding my research paper topic:”Gated communities in T.C.Boyle´s novel “The Tortilla Curtain””. I tried to start with my research paper but noticed a problem which complicated the start a lot.
What is my question?
August 19, 2009 um 2:37 pm
hey. looks good to me
You do really lots of work in order to create a nice paper!
In my opinion the introduction shows clearly your intention and those few words secude to read more. The only thing I could note is your use of language. Achtually I love the style you write, it’s quite easy to understand and flowing, but I’m afrait that it might be to colloquial for such academic work. Unfortunately I don’t have advises on the hand right now, but I’ll think of them. Promise!!
See you tomorrow
Now I want to work a little more on my stuff ^^
August 19, 2009 um 3:35 pm
Hi there!
The inroduction seems alright to me. It would be nice if you could structure your work accordingly and send your table of contents by email or post it here.
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Wiebker is right, you know, you need a little patience to achieve good results. Just think about how you can apply the theme of the gated communities to the novel, create a mind map or whatever else helps you to structure your thoughts. Then everything should fall into place
Speak soon,
Mrs B.
P.S.: The German template is a little confusing. Took me a while to figure out how to respond…